i drink ten gallons of rice milk and pull the headlights out of my car hood
now they are way gone
These poems are sparse, and don't make many obvious interpretive gestures. When I say "interpretive gestures" I mean the "way gone" in the poem above (as opposed to just saying "gone"). When the poems do make those gestures, and because they make them rarely and subtly, it gives the poems an added dimension. Like, woah, where the hell is that coming from? I would say these "little guys"—the technical term I use for minimal poems of 1-5 lines in a Japanese-type style—imply a lot when they're well done, and Steve's are well done. We infer an approachable, intelligent person behind them. That illusion gives the poems a shitload of latent energy. I think "approachable" is the important word. In these poems, Steve doesn't do anything that says "I'm smarter than you" (even though he probably is), and that makes the poems accessible.
Poems like "i drink ten gallons of rice milk..." and
if you call me, i wont answer
i am sitting under the moon inside of a wheelbarrow
have enough weight in themselves that they add another, serious layer to the "joke" poems like
i dont care about reading a poem
who do you think i am, robert frost?
i have never been in the woods and i hate walking
and
you are gone
for lunch i had peanuts
It makes a lot of sense that Steve's read and reviewed Beckman's Your Time Has Come. (He's probably read WCW and plenty of Japanese poems in translation too.) But as far as the contemporary "little guy" tradition is concerned, I would say that many of Steve's poems in "i am like october..." are more interesting than Beckman's in YTHC. But I hate to bring too much interpretation to them 1) because they do their work invisibly and what I'm doing is sloppy in comparison, especially when 2) there just aren't enough poems/enough evidence to work with. I hope after "i am like october when i am dead" Steve gives us a book of 120+ of them.
i rented a movie and recorded over it with two hours of myself
on the video i am shouting compliments at my family
i burn my car on purpose
it is january
i greet myself at the beginning of a great career
2 comments:
nice! good!
don't get the lake michigan part though... but i too enjoy lake michigan!
i would also want to read many more of these!
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